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<![CDATA[
vim cheat sheet
:setlocal spell spelllang=ru_yo en_gb fr
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href=""></a>
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="">(send the link to your google doc (in edit mode!)</a>
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="">(the file will be available here for download later)</a>
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="http://www.ictnle.com/tmp_pdf/"></a>
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<img src="pix/icons8-quiz-100.png" width="35em" border="0" alt="quarterly test"> Prepare for quarterly test
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<notes>
speaking 8-8.5

listening practice
current scores (min7.5) 8-9

reading
current scores (min8) 8.5-9

writing
7-8

overall estimate
8.25/8.5 (8.75)
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<notes>
      What do you need?
          X prove academic skills 
          X justify of a linguistic level
          V pass IELTS to receive a visa

IELTS 5.5 sufficient for secondary school
IELTS 7+ for university

20230427 speaking
20230429 writing

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<clog_session_hw><![CDATA[
<img src="pix/icons8-hand-with-pen-100.png" width="35em" border="0" alt="icons8-hand-with-pen-100.png"> IELTS practice task 1
send samples of past assignments (or paste in googledocs)
→ prepare any questions regarding:
TR task response 
CC cohesion &amp; coherence
LR lexical resource
GRA grammar range &amp; accuracy


Rescheduled from previous lesson
Understanding &amp; paraphrasing topic statements
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YvRQEezh4eG3-BtemPqnLv5dfizgfKqkZjEC-n1RSVQ/edit?usp=sharing">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YvRQEezh4eG3-BtemPqnLv5dfizgfKqkZjEC-n1RSVQ/edit?usp=sharing</a>


<img src="pix/icons8-schedule-100.png" width="35em" border="0" alt="schedule">
20230719 IELTS test

<img src="pix/zoom_meeting.png" width="35em" border="0" alt="zoom_meeting.png"> Zoom meeting details
Sasha Souther - Duncan Potter's Zoom Meeting
Meeting ID: <strong>761 4548 2631</strong>
<strong>Passcode: 9CRp6b</strong>  
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="https://us04web.zoom.us/j/76145482631?pwd=3XKDvcA06MQ2389xwAcbRCBBdeqpML.1">https://us04web.zoom.us/j/76145482631?pwd=3XKDvcA06MQ2389xwAcbRCBBdeqpML.1</a>
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<instructions><![CDATA[Prepare your answers
→ practise with the stopwatch
<!--Discuss the following topic statements.
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="http://www.ictnle.com/tmp_pdf/ielts_speaking_topics_from_aippg.pdf">ielts_speaking_topics_from_aippg.pdf</a>
-->
Drills timing:
→ 2 minute mind map practice
→ 3 minutes argumentation
→ 2 closing questions

Exam timing:
→ 1 minute prep
→ 2-3 minutes argumentation
→ 2 closing questions
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IELTS practice task 1
send samples of past assignments (or paste in googledocs)
→ prepare any questions regarding:
TR task response 
CC cohesion &amp; coherence
LR lexical resource
GRA grammar range &amp; accuracy

T / Cl
Feedback
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<activity_contents><![CDATA[
<span style="font-style: 120%;">
METHODOLOGY <meter value="8" min="0" low="5" max="10"></meter>
✓ paraphrasing topic statement or question to confirm understanding
✓ rhetorical question(s) / hook / quotation
✓ introduction
✓ objectives &amp; tasks  
✓ breakdown / plan of the presentation
✓ logical structure
✓ attentive to interlocutor's expectations
✓ relevance of follow-up questions
✓ clear parts
✓ transitions between parts
✓ timing
✓ clear &amp; memorable conclusion

USE OF LANGUAGE <meter value="7" min="0" low="5" max="10"></meter>
✓ vocab
✓ graded language and little jargon  
✓ grammatical structures &amp; accuracy   
✓ conjunctions, adverbial phrases   
✓ register

DELIVERY <meter value="6" min="0" low="5" max="10"></meter>
✓ pace 
✓ articulation &amp; pronunciation
✓ intonation
✓ stress on keywords

CONCLUSION <meter value="7" min="0" low="5" max="10"></meter> 
✓ recap
✓ general conclusion
✓ recommendations
✓ opening  
</span>
]]></activity_contents>
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]]></activity_contents>
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<activity_id>3</activity_id>
<activity_title>IELTS speaking practice - part 2 - long-turn (3-4min)</activity_title>
<session_date>20230714</session_date>
<hw_anchor>hw20230715</hw_anchor>
<activity_status>active</activity_status>
<activity_type>edit_ol_qa</activity_type>
<activity_type>prep_ol_qa</activity_type>
<activity_icon>pix/icons8-collaboration-100_white.png</activity_icon>
<instructions><![CDATA[Discuss the following topic statements.
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="http://www.ictnle.com/tmp_pdf/ielts_speaking_topics_from_aippg.pdf">ielts_speaking_topics_from_aippg.pdf</a>

Drills timing:
→ 2 minute mind map practice
→ 3 minutes argumentation
→ 2 closing questions

Exam timing:
→ 1 minute prep
→ 2-3 minutes argumentation
→ 2 closing questions
]]></instructions>
<instructions02><![CDATA[Practise the stages below to prepare your answers:
✓ paraphrase topic statement but don't spend too much time 
✓ practise drafting a mind map in 2 minutes
✓ practise answering with 5W questions
     What?
     Where?
     When?
     Who? 
     Why?
✓ focus on the 3 most important arguments, and then give details (← Minto Pyramid approach)
✓ include some more advanced grammar structures
✓ draw a conclusion (signpost with 'Overall, To sum up, To recap')
✓ anticipate closing questions if time available
]]></instructions02>
<!--<instructions_demo><![CDATA[ ]]></instructions_demo> -->
<qas>
</qas>
<key>
</key>
<qa>
<qs>Describe your hometown. What is special about it?
</qs>
<ans>✓ origins
✓ role in history
✓ location &amp; advantages

Keywords:
born &amp; bred
landmark
defaced facades
urban sprawl &amp; economic activity
flabbergasting architecture

〆don't be only descriptive
→ show emotions when describing the place where you were born
</ans>
<hint>
Closing questions:
Would you like to have been born elsewhere?
Should the town-hall attract more tourists?
</hint>
</qa>
<qa>
<qs>Describe a traditional dish in your country. What are the ingredients?
</qs>
<ans>✓ borsh
✓ caviar
→ describe past &amp; future forms

Keywords:
cuisine
savoury
the most distinctive feature
</ans>
<hint>Closing questions:
Do you enjoy cooking?
What is the best meal you have ever had?
</hint>
</qa>
<qa>
<qs>What don’t you know about your future?
</qs>
<ans>✓ destiny is (not) determined by background
✓ importance of up-bringing
✓ ever-changing world

Keywords:
✓ fate
✓ to be poised for
✓ life-long learning
</ans>
<hint>Closing questions:
Do you agree our long-term future is more predictable than in the short term?
Do you feel worried because you are not in control of what is going to happen?
What can you do to shape your future the way you want it?
</hint>
</qa>
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<activity_contents><![CDATA[
T / Cl
Feedback

FC fluency &amp; coherence 5
〆rambling (= loss of coherence)
→ focus on 3 most important arguments (e.g. MBA-like exam question technique)
→ speak slower
〆digressions
→ develop 1 or 2 examples only (instead of many, possibly off-topic)
→ always think of your conclusion first (e.g. Minto Pyramid approach)
〆timing
→ practise w/ a stopwatch

LR lexical resource 6.5/7
✓ vocab
→ identify 3-5 keywords relevant to the topic &amp; make sure you use them
〆register
→ show awareness of formal vs informal
→ prefer unmarked (neutral)
→ practise methodology

GRA grammar range &amp; accuracy 6.5/7
〆avoid long utterances with too many conjunctions &amp; subordinate clauses in spoken form
→ prefer clear-cut, action-result constructions in plain English
→ use metaphors only they are short in description
✓ try using a greater variety of tenses &amp; constructions
→ (mixed) conditionals, cleft sentences, negative adverbial phrases

PR pronunciation 7.5/8
✓ fairly consistent American English accent
〆at times some Irish touch
〆inconsistent (therefore confusing) pronunciation of 'but' in BrEn
→ be consistent
<!--
FC fluency &amp; coherence
LR lexical resource
GRA grammar range &amp; accuracy
PR pronunciation
-->
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<!-- stopped here w/ AO -->
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<activity_contents><![CDATA[
Methodology: Speaking practice - For/against, Minto Pyramid, STAR method

<div class="flex-container" contenteditable="true" style="background-color: yellow; padding-left: 0.5em;">
<div style="width: 43%; word-wrap: break-word; text-align : left;">
<strong>MBA writing strategies - for/against essay</strong>
  
1. Introduction  
→ rephrase the topic statement
= show you understand the subject matter

✓ focus on the top three reasons / arguments in favour of or against
→ support your argumentation with examples
〆don't use a chronological narrative

2. Arguments in favour of
Support statement
  
3. Arguments against
Support statement
  
4. Conclusion
</div>

<div style="padding-left: 4%; width: 24%; word-wrap: break-word; text-align : left;">
<strong>STAR method </strong>
(S) Situation
(T) Task
(A) Action
(R) Result
</div>

<div style="padding-left: 4%; width: 24%; word-wrap: break-word; text-align : left;">
<strong>Minto Pyramid Principle </strong>
1. Answer, thesis or key point
2. Arguments &amp; main points
3. Supporting details &amp; ideas
</div>
</div> 

T / Cl
Oral practice
2 minute mind map practice
3 minutes argumentation
topic statement

T / Cl
Candidate B
Are film stars paid too much?
(...)
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<hw_anchor></hw_anchor>
<activity_status>active</activity_status>
<activity_type>edit_ol_qa</activity_type>
<activity_icon>pix/icons8-collaboration-100_white.png</activity_icon>
<instructions><![CDATA[Discuss the following topic statements.
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="http://www.ictnle.com/tmp_pdf/ielts_speaking_topics_from_aippg.pdf">ielts_speaking_topics_from_aippg.pdf</a>

Timing:
→ 2 minute mind map practice
→ 3 minutes argumentation
→ 2 follow-up questions
]]></instructions>
<instructions02><![CDATA[Practise the stages below to prepare your answers:
✓ paraphrase topic statement but don't spend too much time 
✓ practise drafting a mind map in 2 minutes
✓ practise answering with 5W questions
     What?
     Where?
     When?
     Who? 
     Why?
✓ focus on the 3 most important arguments, and then give details (← Minto Pyramid approach)
✓ include some more advanced grammar structures
✓ draw a conclusion (signpost with 'Overall, To sum up, To recap')
✓ anticipate follow-up questions if time available
]]></instructions02>
<!--<instructions_demo><![CDATA[ ]]></instructions_demo> -->
<qas>
</qas>
<key>
</key>
<qa>
<qs>Discuss the factors affecting people to have more or less children in your country
</qs>
<ans>✓ access to housing
✓ mortgage payment

Keywords:
birthrate
decrease
decline
</ans>
<hint>
</hint>
</qa>
<qa>
<qs>Compare the role of men and women in your country.
</qs>
<ans>✓ patriarchal legacy
✓ regional disparities
✓ unemployment

Keywords:
gender gap
gender inequality
different spheres
</ans>
<hint>
</hint>
</qa>
<qa>
<qs>Governments should spend more money on education than on recreation and sports. Do you agree or disagree?
</qs>
<ans>* education
✓ free education for all?
✓ competition among universities = guarantee of timely syllabuses
→ government intervention or laissez-faire?

* recreation &amp; sports
✓ sports often include arts (e.g. dance)
→ ought to be subsidised

Keywords:
public spending
subsidies
social contentment
leisure
</ans>
<hint>
</hint>
</qa>
<qa>
<qs>Describe the ethnic mix in your country.
</qs>
<ans>✓ rural exodus engenders the decline of local cultures
✓ unifying power of Russian language

Keywords:
✓ diversity
✓ Caucasian, Asian complexions
✓ birth rate

Follow-up questions:
Are there any conflicts among certain ethnic groups?
Are some cultures and languages at risk of disappearing? Why?
</ans>
<hint>
</hint>
</qa>
<qa>
<qs>Why do people collect things? Do you collect anything?
</qs>
<ans>✓ people are afraid of losing their belongings
✓ habit of not wanting to throw away what might come useful one day

Keywords:
✓ consumerism
✓ memorabilia 
✓ sustainable future → recycled goods
✓ second-hand &amp; charity shops

Follow-up questions:
What do you usually keep that might come handy some day?
Are you not concerned collectible items may become obsolete or old-fashioned soon?
</ans>
<hint>
</hint>
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offspring = child of a particular person or couple
nursery = preschool, also known as nursery school, pre-primary school, or play school or creche, is an educational establishment or learning space offering early childhood education to children before they begin compulsory education at primary school. It may be publicly or privately operated, and may be subsidized from public funds

memorabilia = things that people collect because they once belonged to a famous person, or because they are connected with a particular interesting place, event or activity
charity shop (British English) | thrift shop | thrift store (American English and Canadian English) | opportunity shop | op-shop (Australian English and New Zealand English) =  retail establishment run by a charitable organization to raise money. Charity shops are a type of social enterprise. They sell mainly used goods such as clothing, books, music albums, shoes, DVDs, toys, and furniture donated by members of the public, and are often staffed by volunteers

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<clog_deco><![CDATA[
When is your <strong>time for</strong> <strike>hour of</strike> ignoring the world for selfish reasons?
How badly <strong>had</strong> the coronavirus pandemic <strike>had</strike> damaged the world in your opinion?

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Rescheduled from previous lesson
<img src="pix/icons8-hand-with-pen-100.png" width="35em" border="0" alt="icons8-hand-with-pen-100.png"> IELTS practice task 2
<em>Nowadays, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people have?
Has this been a positive or negative development?</em>

focus on quality
✓ no time limit
✓ complete this task with all your notes
✓ you may use a dictionary
→ paste your assignment in a Googledoc
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EUHMYTPhz7qu46YDAL8i2cvRGkq7jX7JiqBdRmr4N48/edit?usp=sharing">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EUHMYTPhz7qu46YDAL8i2cvRGkq7jX7JiqBdRmr4N48/edit?usp=sharing</a>


<img src="pix/icons8-schedule-100.png" width="35em" border="0" alt="schedule">
20230719 IELTS test

<img src="pix/zoom_meeting.png" width="35em" border="0" alt="zoom_meeting.png"> Zoom meeting details
Sasha Souther - Duncan Potter's Zoom Meeting
Meeting ID: <strong>761 4548 2631</strong>
<strong>Passcode: 9CRp6b</strong>  
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="https://us04web.zoom.us/j/76145482631?pwd=3XKDvcA06MQ2389xwAcbRCBBdeqpML.1">https://us04web.zoom.us/j/76145482631?pwd=3XKDvcA06MQ2389xwAcbRCBBdeqpML.1</a>
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<activity_type>edit_2columns_2qa</activity_type> 
<instructions>Read the excerpt carefully &amp; correct the mistakes in the narrative flow.

→ change the order of clauses if relevant
→ change / delete discourse markers as needed
→ add arguments for legibility
</instructions>
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IELTS results 2018
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<functional_language>Improving cohesiveness in the narrative flow</functional_language>
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<activity_type>prep_2columns_2qa</activity_type> 
<instructions><![CDATA[Read the excerpt carefully &amp; correct the mistakes in the narrative flow.

→ change the order of clauses if relevant
→ change / delete discourse markers as needed
→ add arguments for legibility


<em>In order to reduce their carbon footprint, some companies are closing their offices and asking employees to work from home. How effective do you think this solution is? What other methods could companies employ to reduce their carbon footprint?</em>
]]></instructions>
<qa>
<qs><![CDATA[
1) Remote employment eliminates the need to commute to work everyday, 
2) reducing carbon emissions from personal vehicles. 

3) Additionally, no energy is consumed by business centers. 

4) Furthermore, 
4-a) if this trend continues, fewer office buildings will be built in the future, 
4-b) reducing carbon output by cement and construction industries. 

5) Be that as it may, moving workers home results in increased electricity consumption in residential districts. 

6) Moreover, 
6-a) corporations have resources to optimize the workplace, 
6-b) in order to minimize money spent on facilities. 
]]>
</qs>
<ans><![CDATA[
Suggested answer #1
<em>
1 ↔ 2
2) Reducing carbon emissions from personal vehicles. 
1) remote employment eliminates the need to commute to work everyday, 

3) Additionally, no energy is consumed by business centres. 
5 → 3
5) Be that as it may, moving workers home results in increased electricity consumption in residential districts. 

4) <strike>Furthermore</strike> <strong>Nonetheless</strong>,
4-a) if this trend continues, fewer office buildings will be built in the future, 
4-b) reducing carbon output by cement and construction industries. 

6 → 4
6) <strike>Moreover</strike> <strong>Indeed</strong>, 
<strong>- unlike residential housing -</strong>
6-a) corporations have resources to optimize the workplace, 
6-b) in order to minimize money spent on facilities. 
</em>

Suggested answer #2
<em>
1) Remote employment eliminates the need to commute to work everyday

6) Moreover,
6-b) to minimize money spent on facilities,
6-a) corporations can optimize the workplace.

3) Additionally, no energy is consumed by business centers.

4) Furthermore,
4-a) remote employment can lead to the decrease of office buildings built in the future.
4-b) If we consider environmental problems, telework will reduce carbon output by cement and construction industries, as well as from personal vehicles.

5) However, if workers are moved home, this will cause increased electricity consumption in residential districts.
</em>
]]></ans>
<hint>
1 ↔ 2
5 → 3
6 → 4
</hint>
</qa>
<qa>
<qs><![CDATA[1) Additionally, social media platforms allow people to be up to date with the lives of their friends, giving them a feeling of involvement. 

2) Furthermore, it is now as simple as ever to find like-minded people and confer. 

3-a) Moreover, all over the world people connect with each other via through internet technologies. 
3-b-a) For example, a jobseeker might find remote employment in a company 
3-b-b)which is located on another continent. 

4) Similarly, an employer can list vacancies online. 

5) Additionally, telecommunication technologies facilitate science communication. 
]]></qs><ans>
</ans>
<hint>Improve stylistic diversity:
→ avoid a mechanical use of discourse markers when listing many arguments
→ avoid subordinate clauses nested (embedded) into others
</hint>
</qa>
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<activity_id>1</activity_id>
<activity_title>Understanding &amp; paraphrasing topic statements</activity_title>
<hw_anchor></hw_anchor>
<activity_status>active</activity_status>
<activity_type>edit_ol_qa</activity_type>
<activity_icon>pix/icons8-collaboration-100_white.png</activity_icon>
<instructions><![CDATA[Paraphrase the topic statements below to confirm your understanding, gain time for thinking, and eventually introduce your answer.]]></instructions>
<instructions02><![CDATA[Paraphrasing strategies:
✓ practise answering B1 questions on C2 topics
✓ practise answering C1 questions on B1 topics
✓ imagine topic statements &amp; make them more difficult (i.e. more targeted) 

Notes:
B1 - intermediate
B2 - upper intermediate
C1 - advanced
]]></instructions02>
<instructions_demo><![CDATA[Soon people who cannot work with computers will be disadvantaged. 
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea? (B1)

↔ Computer illiteracy will widen the generation gap &amp; leave digital immigrants lagging behind. 
Provide evidence to this claim. (C1)
]]></instructions_demo>
<qas>
</qas>
<key>
</key>
<qa>
<qs>Soon people who cannot work with computers will be disadvantaged. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea? (B1)
→ paraphrase and/or make this question more advanced (B1/B2))
</qs>
<ans>Suggested answers:
↔ Computer illiteracy will widen the generation gap &amp; leave digital immigrants lagging behind. Provide evidence to this claim. (C1)
↔ Will elder generations have greater difficulty in alleviating this disadvantage? (B2 / C1)
↔ Do you agree that, generally speaking, the use of computers makes life easier? (B1)

Keywords:
computer literacy
computer illiteracy
generation gap
</ans>
<hint>
</hint>
</qa>
<qa>
<qs>Why do some people argue that carbon emissions may generate a greenhouse effect?
→ make this question easier (A2 / B1)
</qs>
<ans>Suggested answers:
↔ Do you believe global warming will have a negative impact on the environment? (B1/B2)
↔ Do you think increasing temperature is bad for the world? (A2 / B1)

Notes:
〆avoid using simple words like 'good, bad, interesting'
</ans>
<hint>
</hint>
</qa>
<qa>
<qs>How do you decide on a finishing time and stick to it (B1 / B2)
→ make this question more idiomatic (B1+)
</qs>
<ans>Suggested answers:
↔ How do you set a deadline &amp; keep it (B1)
↔ How do you select your target time frames &amp; never reschedule them? (B2)

Notes:
〆stick = informal register
✓ keep = unmarked register
〆 decide on a finishing time 
≠ collocation ← A2 / B1
✓ set a deadline = B1+
target time frame = business English B2
</ans>
<hint>
</hint>
</qa>
<qa>
<qs>What do you think the result of the coronavirus will be? (A2 / B1)
→ make this question more advanced (B2 / C1)
</qs>
<ans>Suggested answers:
In your view, what will the COVID19 pandemic &amp; its lock-down bring about? (B2 / C1)

Notes:
✓ lock-down 
= now a buzzword, a strong collocation in today's world
→ must-have
</ans>
<hint>
</hint>
</qa>
<qa>
<qs>
</qs>
<ans>
</ans>
<hint>
</hint>
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<instructions_demo><![CDATA[Let's talk first about... (your country)
 ]]></instructions_demo>
<qas>
</qas>
<key>
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<qa>
<qs>What's the best thing about living in your country?</qs>
<ans>
</ans>
<hint>
</hint>
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<qa>
<qs>How do people enjoy themselves in their free time?</qs>
<ans>
</ans>
<hint>
</hint>
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<qa>
<qs>What places are there for a tourist to visit?</qs>
<ans>
</ans>
<hint>
</hint>
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<qa>
<qs>Let's move on to your future plans...
What are planning to do after the IELTS test?</qs>
<ans>
</ans>
<hint>
</hint>
</qa>
<qa>
<qs>Do you have any long term plans?</qs>
<ans>
</ans>
<hint>
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<qs>Where would you like to be living in 5 years?</qs>
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<activity_title>IELTS speaking practice - part 2 - long-turn (3-4min)</activity_title>
<session_date>20230714</session_date>
<hw_anchor>hw20230715</hw_anchor>
<activity_status>active</activity_status>
<activity_type>prep_ol_qa</activity_type>
<activity_type>edit_ol_qa</activity_type>
<activity_icon>pix/icons8-collaboration-100_white.png</activity_icon>
<instructions><![CDATA[Discuss the following topic statements.
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="http://www.ictnle.com/tmp_pdf/ielts_speaking_topics_from_aippg.pdf">ielts_speaking_topics_from_aippg.pdf</a>

Drills timing:
→ 2 minute mind map practice
→ 3 minutes argumentation
→ 2 closing questions

Exam timing:
→ 1 minute prep
→ 2-3 minutes argumentation
→ 2 closing questions
]]></instructions>
<instructions02><![CDATA[Practise the stages below to prepare your answers:
✓ paraphrase topic statement but don't spend too much time 
✓ practise drafting a mind map in 2 minutes
✓ practise answering with 5W questions
     What?
     Where?
     When?
     Who? 
     Why?
✓ focus on the 3 most important arguments, and then give details (← Minto Pyramid approach)
✓ include some more advanced grammar structures
✓ draw a conclusion (signpost with 'Overall, To sum up, To recap')
✓ anticipate closing questions if time available
]]></instructions02>
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<qas>
</qas>
<key>
</key>
<qa>
<qs>Describe your hometown. What is special about it?
</qs>
<ans>✓ origins
✓ role in history
✓ location &amp; advantages

Keywords:
born &amp; bred
landmark
defaced facades
urban sprawl &amp; economic activity
flabbergasting architecture

〆don't be only descriptive
→ show emotions when describing the place where you were born
</ans>
<hint>
Closing questions:
Would you like to have been born elsewhere?
Should the town-hall attract more tourists?
</hint>
</qa>
<qa>
<qs>Describe a traditional dish in your country. What are the ingredients?
</qs>
<ans>✓ borsh
✓ caviar
→ describe past &amp; future forms

Keywords:
cuisine
savoury
the most distinctive feature
</ans>
<hint>Closing questions:
Do you enjoy cooking?
What is the best meal you have ever had?
</hint>
</qa>
<qa>
<qs>What don’t you know about your future?
</qs>
<ans>✓ destiny is (not) determined by background
✓ importance of up-bringing
✓ ever-changing world

Keywords:
✓ fate
✓ to be poised for
✓ life-long learning
</ans>
<hint>Closing questions:
Do you agree our long-term future is more predictable than in the short term?
Do you feel worried because you are not in control of what is going to happen?
What can you do to shape your future the way you want it?
</hint>
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memorabilia = things that people collect because they once belonged to a famous person, or because they are connected with a particular interesting place, event or activity
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<clog_session_hw><![CDATA[

<img src="pix/icons8-hand-with-pen-100.png" width="35em" border="0" alt="icons8-hand-with-pen-100.png"> IELTS practice task 2
<em>Nowadays, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people have?
Has this been a positive or negative development?</em>

focus on quality
✓ no time limit
✓ complete this task with all your notes
✓ you may use a dictionary
→ paste your assignment in a Googledoc
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="">(send the link to your google doc (in edit mode!)</a>


<img src="pix/icons8-smartphone-tablet-100.png" width="35em" border="0" alt="smartphone or tablet device"> Download onto your phone or tablet and drill with space repetition software.
Academic wordlist - adapted by D.Potter 
✓ AmE → BrE translation
✓ selection from Focus on IELTS AWL (Academic Word List) 
✓ selection from Morris College 
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="http://www.ictnle.com/tmp_pdf/ielts_wordlist_morris_college_C2.csv">ielts_wordlist_morris_college_C2.csv</a>
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="http://www.ictnle.com/tmp_pdf/ielts_wordlist_morris_college_C2_tsv.txt">ielts_wordlist_morris_college_C2_tsv.txt</a>

<img src="pix/icons8-schedule-100.png" width="35em" border="0" alt="schedule">
20230719 IELTS test

<img src="pix/zoom_meeting.png" width="35em" border="0" alt="zoom_meeting.png"> Zoom meeting details
Sasha Souther - Duncan Potter's Zoom Meeting
Meeting ID: <strong>761 4548 2631</strong>
<strong>Passcode: 9CRp6b</strong>  
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="https://us04web.zoom.us/j/76145482631?pwd=3XKDvcA06MQ2389xwAcbRCBBdeqpML.1">https://us04web.zoom.us/j/76145482631?pwd=3XKDvcA06MQ2389xwAcbRCBBdeqpML.1</a>
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<instructions>Read the excerpt carefully &amp; correct the mistakes in the narrative flow.

→ change the order of clauses if relevant
→ change / delete discourse markers as needed
→ add arguments for legibility
</instructions>
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<hw_anchor>hw20230714</hw_anchor>
<functional_language>Improving cohesiveness in the narrative flow</functional_language>
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<activity_type>edit_2columns_2qa</activity_type> 
<instructions><![CDATA[Read the excerpt carefully &amp; correct the mistakes in the narrative flow.

→ change the order of clauses if relevant
→ change / delete discourse markers as needed
→ add arguments for legibility


<em>In order to reduce their carbon footprint, some companies are closing their offices and asking employees to work from home. How effective do you think this solution is? What other methods could companies employ to reduce their carbon footprint?</em>
]]></instructions>
<qa>
<qs><![CDATA[
1) Remote employment eliminates the need to commute to work everyday, 
2) reducing carbon emissions from personal vehicles. 

3) Additionally, no energy is consumed by business centers. 

4) Furthermore, 
4-a) if this trend continues, fewer office buildings will be built in the future, 
4-b) reducing carbon output by cement and construction industries. 

5) Be that as it may, moving workers home results in increased electricity consumption in residential districts. 

6) Moreover, 
6-a) corporations have resources to optimize the workplace, 
6-b) in order to minimize money spent on facilities. 
]]>
</qs>
<ans><![CDATA[
Suggested answer #1
<em>
1 ↔ 2
2) Reducing carbon emissions from personal vehicles. 
1) remote employment eliminates the need to commute to work everyday, 

3) Additionally, no energy is consumed by business centres. 
5 → 3
5) Be that as it may, moving workers home results in increased electricity consumption in residential districts. 

4) <strike>Furthermore</strike> <strong>Nonetheless</strong>,
4-a) if this trend continues, fewer office buildings will be built in the future, 
4-b) reducing carbon output by cement and construction industries. 

6 → 4
6) <strike>Moreover</strike> <strong>Indeed</strong>, 
<strong>- unlike residential housing -</strong>
6-a) corporations have resources to optimize the workplace, 
6-b) in order to minimize money spent on facilities. 
</em>

Suggested answer #2
<em>
1) Remote employment eliminates the need to commute to work everyday

6) Moreover,
6-b) to minimize money spent on facilities,
6-a) corporations can optimize the workplace.

3) Additionally, no energy is consumed by business centers.

4) Furthermore,
4-a) remote employment can lead to the decrease of office buildings built in the future.
4-b) If we consider environmental problems, telework will reduce carbon output by cement and construction industries, as well as from personal vehicles.

5) However, if workers are moved home, this will cause increased electricity consumption in residential districts.
</em>
]]></ans>
<hint>
1 ↔ 2
5 → 3
6 → 4
</hint>
</qa>
<qa>
<qs><![CDATA[1) Additionally, social media platforms allow people to be up to date with the lives of their friends, giving them a feeling of involvement. 

2) Furthermore, it is now as simple as ever to find like-minded people and confer. 

3-a) Moreover, all over the world people connect with each other via through internet technologies. 
3-b-a) For example, a jobseeker might find remote employment in a company 
3-b-b)which is located on another continent. 

4) Similarly, an employer can list vacancies online. 

5) Additionally, telecommunication technologies facilitate science communication. 
]]></qs><ans>
</ans>
<hint>Improve stylistic diversity:
→ avoid a mechanical use of discourse markers when listing many arguments
→ avoid subordinate clauses nested (embedded) into others
</hint>
</qa>
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<activity_status>active</activity_status>
<activity_type>deck_shuffled_lines_halign</activity_type>
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<instructions><![CDATA[How do you approach a writing task?
Put the stages in the correct order.]]></instructions>
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</div>
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<activity_contents><![CDATA[
start with the conclusion
bullet-point the (likely) parts of the body
paragraph your thoughts (i.e. put bullet-points together)
find examples to illustrate the narrative flow
continue with the introduction
(re)define parts of the body (1 idea + 1 example / paragraph)
complete the introduction (signpost your plan)
fine-tune contents by finding synonyms to improve style
update conclusion
open to another topic 
]]></activity_contents>
<key><![CDATA[
start with the conclusion
bullet-point the (likely) parts of the body
paragraph your thoughts (i.e. put bullet-points together)
find examples to illustrate the narrative flow
continue with the introduction
(re)define parts of the body (1 idea + 1 example / paragraph)
complete the introduction (signpost your plan)
fine-tune contents by finding synonyms to improve style
update conclusion
open to another topic 
]]></key>
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<activity_id></activity_id>
<activity_title>IELTS scoring in detail - speaking</activity_title>
<activity_status>active</activity_status>
<activity_type>textbook</activity_type>
<pdf_file>tmp_pdf/ielts_speaking-band-descriptors.pdf</pdf_file>
<activity_contents><![CDATA[
IELTS scoring in detail
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="https://www.ielts.org/for-organisations/ielts-scoring-in-detail">https://www.ielts.org/for-organisations/ielts-scoring-in-detail</a>

SPEAKING: Band Descriptors
Fluency and coherence 
Lexical resource 
Grammatical range and accuracy 
Pronunciation
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5/6 development or superficial listing of many points

CC cohesion &amp; coherence
✓ provide each idea followed by an example &amp; subordinate clause
〆avoid verbs w/o an object
✓ discourse markers
→ strike a balance between critical thinking vs language skills relevance

LR lexical resource
✓ spelling
✓ synonyms
✓ B2 vs C1
GRA grammar range &amp; accuracy
✓ discourse markers
participle clauses
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How long have you been studying English?
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<qa>
<qs>What do you enjoy most about your studies?
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<instructions02><![CDATA[Paraphrasing strategies:
✓ practise answering B1 questions on C2 topics
✓ practise answering C1 questions on B1 topics
✓ imagine topic statements &amp; make them more difficult (i.e. more targeted) 

Notes:
B1 - intermediate
B2 - upper intermediate
C1 - advanced
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<instructions_demo><![CDATA[Soon people who cannot work with computers will be disadvantaged. 
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea? (B1)

↔ Computer illiteracy will widen the generation gap &amp; leave digital immigrants lagging behind. 
Provide evidence to this claim. (C1)
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</qs>
<ans>Suggested answers:
↔ Computer illiteracy will widen the generation gap &amp; leave digital immigrants lagging behind. Provide evidence to this claim. (C1)
↔ Will elder generations have greater difficulty in alleviating this disadvantage? (B2 / C1)
↔ Do you agree that, generally speaking, the use of computers makes life easier? (B1)

Keywords:
computer literacy
computer illiteracy
generation gap
</ans>
<hint>
</hint>
</qa>
<qa>
<qs>Why do some people argue that carbon emissions may generate a greenhouse effect?
→ make this question easier (A2 / B1)
</qs>
<ans>Suggested answers:
↔ Do you believe global warming will have a negative impact on the environment? (B1/B2)
↔ Do you think increasing temperature is bad for the world? (A2 / B1)

Notes:
〆avoid using simple words like 'good, bad, interesting'
</ans>
<hint>
</hint>
</qa>
<qa>
<qs>How do you decide on a finishing time and stick to it (B1 / B2)
→ make this question more idiomatic (B1+)
</qs>
<ans>Suggested answers:
↔ How do you set a deadline &amp; keep it (B1)
↔ How do you select your target time frames &amp; never reschedule them? (B2)

Notes:
〆stick = informal register
✓ keep = unmarked register
〆 decide on a finishing time 
≠ collocation ← A2 / B1
✓ set a deadline = B1+
target time frame = business English B2
</ans>
<hint>
</hint>
</qa>
<qa>
<qs>What do you think the result of the coronavirus will be? (A2 / B1)
→ make this question more advanced (B2 / C1)
</qs>
<ans>Suggested answers:
In your view, what will the COVID19 pandemic &amp; its lock-down bring about? (B2 / C1)

Notes:
✓ lock-down 
= now a buzzword, a strong collocation in today's world
→ must-have
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<qs>What places are there for a tourist to visit?</qs>
<ans>
</ans>
<hint>
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What are planning to do after the IELTS test?</qs>
<ans>
</ans>
<hint>
</hint>
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<qa>
<qs>Do you have any long term plans?</qs>
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</ans>
<hint>
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<clog_session_title>IELTS | Review of writing descriptors | Review of speaking tasks: interview</clog_session_title>
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IELTS practice task 1
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="http://www.ictnle.com/tmp_pdf/116930_IELTS_AC_Writing_Task_1-1.pdf">116930_IELTS_AC_Writing_Task_1-1.pdf</a>  
<img src="pix/icons8-hand-with-pen-100.png" width="35em" border="0" alt="icons8-hand-with-pen-100.png"> Writing test part 1
focus on time
✓ 20min only
✓ complete this task without any notes
✓ you may not use a dictionary
→ paste your assignment in a Googledoc
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="">(send the link to your google doc (in edit mode!)</a>


<img src="pix/icons8-smartphone-tablet-100.png" width="35em" border="0" alt="smartphone or tablet device"> <img src="pix/icons8-print-50.png" width="35em" border="0" alt="print"> Download onto your tablet or print the following pdf for our next lesson.
Focus on IELTS - New Edition
Practice interview, long turn, discussion
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="http://www.ictnle.com/tmp_pdf/focus_on_ielts_new_edition_students_book_pg202-3_practice_interview_long_turn_discussion.pdf">focus_on_ielts_new_edition_students_book_pg202-3_practice_interview_long_turn_discussion.pdf</a>

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The Listening, Reading and Writing sections of all IELTS tests are completed on the same day, with no breaks in between them.
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The third section, ‘general reading’, involves reading more extended prose with a more complex structure. Here, the emphasis is on descriptive and instructive rather than argumentative texts, in a general context relevant to the wide range of test takers involved, for example, newspapers, magazines and fictional and non-fictional book extracts.
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20230719 IELTS test

<img src="pix/zoom_meeting.png" width="35em" border="0" alt="zoom_meeting.png"> Zoom meeting details
Sasha Souther - Duncan Potter's Zoom Meeting
Meeting ID: <strong>761 4548 2631</strong>
<strong>Passcode: 9CRp6b</strong>  
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Introduction to IELTS
✓ swot for an exam
✓ how to make drilling more interesting / challenging
✓ understanding the rationale of a task
✓ practice with a stopwatch
(...)

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IELTS target levels
IELTS 5 (B1) sufficient for work visa
IELTS 5.5 (B2 / FCE) sufficient for secondary school
IELTS 7+ (C1) university
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<u>Number of teaching hours per level</u>
(according to ALTE - Association of Language Testers of Europe)
CEF (Common European Framework) Guide, Pearson

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EF - levels &amp; exams concordances
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<qa>
<qs>interview [4-5min]
</qs>
<ans>✓ prepare warmer questions &amp; ready-made answers
→ answer easy topics with advanced language if you can
✓ identify the rationale of the task 
→ use 'would' in the answer to show you know how to build conditional sentences
✓ identify functional language needed (descriptive / persuasive / comparison)
→ use fluency markers to gain time (well, actually...)
→ use conjunctions to improve narrative flow
〆 avoid easy mistakes (e.g. use of articles)</ans>
<hint>
</hint>
</qa>
<qa>
<qs>long turn [3-4min]
</qs>
<ans><![CDATA[✓ find synonyms to evidence a wide range of vocab
e.g.
I <strike>like very much</strike> <strong>am keen on | adore </strong>  computer games
I <strike>like</strike> <strong>indulge myself in / with</strong> playing computer games, although I have responsibilities, a family...
You <strike>should</strike>  <strong>ought to</strong> visit XYZ
✓ you don't have to say the truth
→ you can lie
✓ use synonyms to show you understand all words
✓ avoid topics which you can't describe because you haven't got enough vocab
✓ avoid ending your answers in an abrupt manner e.g. 'and that's it'
→ try to conclude in a positive, convincing way
]]></ans>
<hint>
</hint>
</qa>
<qa>
<qs>discussion [4-5min]
</qs>
<ans>✓ should be a two-way discussion
→ pay attention to the examiner's reactions
≠ monologue
</ans>
<hint>
</hint>
</qa>
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<activity_id></activity_id>
<activity_title>IELTS scoring in detail - writing task 1</activity_title>
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<activity_contents><![CDATA[
IELTS scoring in detail
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="https://www.ielts.org/for-organisations/ielts-scoring-in-detail">https://www.ielts.org/for-organisations/ielts-scoring-in-detail</a>

SPEAKING: Band Descriptors
Fluency and coherence 
Lexical resource 
Grammatical range and accuracy 
Pronunciation
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WRITING TASK 1: Band Descriptors
TR task response 
CC cohesion &amp; coherence
LR lexical resource
GRA grammar range &amp; accuracy
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5/6 development or superficial listing of many points

CC cohesion &amp; coherence
✓ provide each idea followed by an example &amp; subordinate clause
〆avoid verbs w/o an object
✓ discourse markers
→ strike a balance between critical thinking vs language skills relevance

LR lexical resource
✓ spelling
✓ synonyms
✓ B2 vs C1
GRA grammar range &amp; accuracy
✓ discourse markers
participle clauses
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Writing test part 1
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="http://www.ictnle.com/tmp_pdf/116930_IELTS_AC_Writing_Task_1-1.pdf">116930_IELTS_AC_Writing_Task_1-1.pdf</a>  

<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="">(send the link to your google doc (in edit mode!)</a>

T / Cl
What issues does this writing address?
✓ equal opportunities
✓ gender gap
✓ lifelong learning

T / Cl
Feedback
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→ lack of time to complete task adequately (grammar &amp; vocab)
→ avoid describing visuals in detail
✓ comment on trends, not on lines or sections
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→ draw attention to main features (but don't speculate)
→ identify keywords relevant to the given topic
→ make comparisons
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IELTS topics &amp; arguments
→ start reviewing topics &amp; vocab
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="http://www.ictnle.com/tmp_pdf/ielts_topics_and_arguments_wip.docx">ielts_topics_and_arguments_wip.docx</a>
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pNMkVSBIIRQ7p47L0fE2iqaHuSo-YCsl5kNLHK2SWNM/edit">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pNMkVSBIIRQ7p47L0fE2iqaHuSo-YCsl5kNLHK2SWNM/edit</a>


<img src="pix/icons8-smartphone-tablet-100.png" width="35em" border="0" alt="smartphone or tablet device"> <img src="pix/icons8-print-50.png" width="35em" border="0" alt="print"> Download onto your tablet or print the following pdf for our next lesson.
IELTS writing task 2
Writing Topics for IELTS Examination
(http://www.aippg.net/forum)
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="http://www.ictnle.com/tmp_pdf/ielts_writing_topics.pdf">ielts_writing_topics.pdf</a>
<img src="pix/icons8-hand-with-pen-100.png" width="35em" border="0" alt="icons8-hand-with-pen-100.png"> Writing task
→ choose a topic
✓ 40min time limit
= practise writing for time rather than for quality
→ don't use dictionaries, a thesaurus, etc
→ write ~ 200 words
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IELTS scoring in detail
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="https://www.ielts.org/for-organisations/ielts-scoring-in-detail">https://www.ielts.org/for-organisations/ielts-scoring-in-detail</a>

WRITING TASK 2: Band Descriptors
TR task response 
CC cohesion &amp; coherence
LR lexical resource
GRA grammar range &amp; accuracy
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TR task response 
✓ intro &amp; conclusion
✓ 4 paraphraphs5 if under length 
5/6 development or superficial listing of many points

CC cohesion &amp; coherence
✓ provide each idea followed by an example &amp; subordinate clause
〆avoid verbs w/o an object
✓ discourse markers
→ strike a balance between critical thinking vs language skills relevance

LR lexical resource
✓ spelling
✓ synonyms
✓ B2 vs C1
GRA grammar range &amp; accuracy
✓ discourse markers
participle clauses
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<activity_contents><![CDATA[
Speaking English I can travel everywhere
'speaking English' means [because I speak English | at the moment I speak English]?
✓ because I speak English
[present | past | perfect] participle
✓ present participle
(meaning present + present)

Surprised, I couldn't say anything
'surprised' means [because I was surprised | at the time I was surprised]
✓ because I was surprised
[present | past | perfect] participle
✓ past participle

I have seen this film 3 times, I don't want to watch again
Complete this sentence
Having...
Having seen this film 3 times, I don't want to watch again
[present | past | perfect] participle
✓ perfect
(meaning past + present)
action in the main clause = [reason / consequence] 
✓ consequence

Having seen the car (3 days ago), I decided to buy it (this morning)
✓ having seen
= because

Seeing the car (this morning), I decided to buy it (this morning)
✓ seeing 
= when I saw | because
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<em>Nowadays, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people have?
Has this been a positive or negative development?</em>

Introduction:
Interpersonal relationships are a pivotal mechanism of our society. 
No man can endure protracted solitude.
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<ans>Interpersonal relationships being a pivotal mechanism of our society,
no man can endure protracted solitude.
</ans>
<hint>Indeed | Because
</hint>
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<qa>
<qs><![CDATA[Topic statement:
<em>In order to reduce their carbon footprint, some companies are closing their offices and asking employees to work from home. How effective do you think this solution is? What other methods could companies employ to reduce their carbon footprint?</em>

Global warming is one of the most pressing problems of the 21st century. 
Everyone is trying to contribute to the solution of this issue.
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<ans>Global warming being one of the most pressing problems of the 21st century,
everyone is trying to contribute to the solution of this issue.
</ans>
<hint>that’s why
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<instructions>Match the formal Latin expressions with their more common Anglo-Saxon synonyms of unmarked or informal register.</instructions>
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<qs>An elevated chance of peril was observed.</qs>
<ans>You could see a high risk of danger.</ans>
<hint>→ used to warn sb that if they do sth, it may be dangerous or cause them problems</hint>
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<qa>
<qs>One's life may be imperilled.</qs>
<ans>The life of people can be in danger</ans>
<hint>→ to put sth/sb in danger
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<qa>
<qs>Government endeavours are often only laudable.</qs>
<ans>What town-halls try doing should be welcome though it often fails.</ans>
<hint>→ attempt to do sth, especially sth new or difficult
→ deserving to be praised or admired, even if not really successful
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<qs>Subsequent schemes appeared to be quite auspicious.</qs>
<ans>The next outlines looked very promising.</ans>
<hint>→ following a specified event etc. in time, esp. as a consequence
→ showing signs that sth is likely to be successful in the future
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This stimulus is a substantial deterrent
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→ change the order of clauses if relevant
→ change / delete discourse markers as needed
→ add arguments for legibility

<em>In order to reduce their carbon footprint, some companies are closing their offices and asking employees to work from home. How effective do you think this solution is? What other methods could companies employ to reduce their carbon footprint?</em>
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1) Remote employment eliminates the need to commute to work everyday, 
2) reducing carbon emissions from personal vehicles. 

3) Additionally, no energy is consumed by business centers. 

4) Furthermore, 
4-a) if this trend continues, fewer office buildings will be built in the future, 
4-b) reducing carbon output by cement and construction industries. 

5) Be that as it may, moving workers home results in increased electricity consumption in residential districts. 

6) Moreover, 
6-a) corporations have resources to optimize the workplace, 
6-b) in order to minimize money spent on facilities. 
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<em>
1 ↔ 2
2) Reducing carbon emissions from personal vehicles. 
1) remote employment eliminates the need to commute to work everyday, 

3) Additionally, no energy is consumed by business centres. 
5 → 3
5) Be that as it may, moving workers home results in increased electricity consumption in residential districts. 

4) <strike>Furthermore</strike> <strong>Nonetheless</strong>,
4-a) if this trend continues, fewer office buildings will be built in the future, 
4-b) reducing carbon output by cement and construction industries. 

6 → 4
6) <strike>Moreover</strike> <strong>Indeed</strong>, 
<strong>- unlike residential housing -</strong>
6-a) corporations have resources to optimize the workplace, 
6-b) in order to minimize money spent on facilities. 
</em>

Suggested answer #2
<em>
1) Remote employment eliminates the need to commute to work everyday

6) Moreover,
6-b) to minimize money spent on facilities,
6-a) corporations can optimize the workplace.

3) Additionally, no energy is consumed by business centers.

4) Furthermore,
4-a) remote employment can lead to the decrease of office buildings built in the future.
4-b) If we consider environmental problems, telework will reduce carbon output by cement and construction industries, as well as from personal vehicles.

5) However, if workers are moved home, this will cause increased electricity consumption in residential districts.
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<qs><![CDATA[1) Additionally, social media platforms allow people to be up to date with the lives of their friends, giving them a feeling of involvement. 

2) Furthermore, it is now as simple as ever to find like-minded people and confer. 

3-a) Moreover, all over the world people connect with each other via through internet technologies. 
3-b-a) For example, a jobseeker might find remote employment in a company 
3-b-b)which is located on another continent. 

4) Similarly, an employer can list vacancies online. 

5) Additionally, telecommunication technologies facilitate science communication. 
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<ans>
</ans>
<hint>Improve stylistic diversity:
→ avoid a mechanical use of discourse markers when listing many arguments
→ avoid subordinate clauses nested (embedded) into others
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Target grammar skills - subject to needs
- conditionals
- mixed conditionals
- pronouns &amp; determiners
- conjunctions &amp; discourse markers
- modal verbs to express obligation, deduction
- verb patterns
- past and present habits with would / will
- cleft sentences
- expressing regrets
- inversion after negative adverbials
- subjunctive

<img src="pix/icons8-smartphone-tablet-100.png" width="35em" border="0" alt="smartphone or tablet device"> Download onto your phone or tablet and drill with space repetition software.
Academic wordlist - adapted by D.Potter 
✓ AmE → BrE translation
✓ selection from Focus on IELTS AWL (Academic Word List) 
✓ selection from Morris College 
<a class="clog" target="about_blank" href="http://www.ictnle.com/tmp_pdf/ielts_wordlist_morris_college_C2.csv">ielts_wordlist_morris_college_C2.csv</a>
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Methodology: TOEFL / IELTS past target levels and actual results

<pre>
level | Cambridge | IELTS   | TOEFL IBT
B2    | FCE       | 5.0-6.0 | 65-68
C1    | CAE       | 6.5-7.0 | 79-95
C2    | CPE       | 7.5-9.0 | 96-210
</pre>

<u>2023 IELTS candidate (male student in engineering, age 22)</u>
course length: ~ ach (1.5ach x 2 / wk ~ 1.5 months)
initial level: ~IELTS 7.5
target level: IELTS 8
exam results: IELTS 8

Provisional results 
Listening 8.5 (7.5-9) (incl. 1-2 spelling mistakes)
Reading 8.5 (8-9)
Writing 7 (6.5-8) if can stick to 40min...
Speaking 8 (8-8.5)
Overall 8/8.5 (8.75→9)

Final results
Listening 9
Reading 9
Writing 6 (probably accident bc had never scored so low)
Speaking 7.5 (probably loss 0.5 bc was too nervous)
Overall 8
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Speaking: It was okay, especially considering that I got a nice topic in the "long term", which I had thought of before the exam. It was about the city that I want to visit but only for a short time. The 3rd part was urban related and the more I think about it the more I feel that I could have done better. The problem is that I missed several important piece of vocabulary, such as "urban sprawl" and in general I feel like my answers were not convincing. I hope my answer in 1st and 2nd part will offset poor 3rd section.
Listening: I am worried about couple of question, but I am sure that the score will be higher than 7.5 and most probably higher than 8
Reading: eze 9
Writing task 1: I sent a lot of time on the 1st task around 22 minutes, even though I had spent maybe only 2-3 on brainstorming and then started writing right away. I am afraid that I didn't do enough comparing, I had related graphs two times but I thought of another comparison after and I could have added one more phrase in the conclusion, conceptually describing the change that was shown, but I decided to move to the 2nd task.
Writing task 2: the topic wasn't that hard, however, there was a lot of erasing involved. The topic was about studying and the pros and cons of studying far away from home. I covered both parts however. the biggest problem is I had only a couple of minutes left to check my work and I didn't count how many word I had written and only skimmed my essay  and corrected a couple of mistakes, but I tried to use as many fancy words as I could so hopefully that will offset my poor spelling. Also I tried to write in complex sentences so I feel like I can get a 7 for writing.
To sum up, L: 8.5 (let's hope I am lucky); R: 9 W: 7; S: 7 => O: 8?
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<u>2020 IELTS candidate (male IT, age 30)</u>
course length: ~100 ach (2ach x 1-3 / wk ~ 6 months)
initial level: ~IELTS 4/4.5
target level: IELTS 5 
exam results: IELTS 5.5

Provisional results 
Listening 5.0
Reading 5.5
Writing 5.5
Speaking 6.5
Overall 5.5


<u>2017 IELTS candidate (female PR, age 28)</u>
course length: 128 ach (2ach x 2 / wk ~ 8 months)
initial level: ~IELTS 6/6.5
target level: IELTS 7 
exam results: IELTS 7

IELTS feedback
expected results
speaking 7
wri task 1 6.5 / 7
wri task 2 7 / 7.5
lis       6.5
read      7


<u>2016 TOEFL candidate (male MGIMO student, age 23)</u>
course length: 144 ach (2ach x 2 / wk - 9 months)
initial level: ~IELTS 6/6.5
target level: TOEFL 95
exam results: TOEFL 91
<pre>
TOEFL score
speaking  CAE / CP  24/30  24 improve campus situations
writing             20/30  23 improve grammar
reading             23/30  23
lis                 20/30  25? (missed a task)
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                    87/120 (needs 95/120)
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TOEFL_Speaking_Full_Practice_Test_1_Learn_English_bcKxuAq4eGo.mp4
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20230719 IELTS test

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Sasha Souther - Duncan Potter's Zoom Meeting
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